Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Ill at ease

Forbidden all rights of passage,
Molly said to Adam,
I'm a sunken ship, lost in battle,
protect this life, i'm lost.
Because love is anything but honest,
when two hearts collide we make amends.

3 comments:

  1. I think that this passage a good example of imagery and personification of our view of vital aspects in life. The image of being lost permits our mind to wonder to the unknown dark places and corners of the world. These dark places are not of those in which we familiar with yet when we get to know these ambiguous areas we recall those moments as love. This close reading also mimics love. It shows that, as far as we know, love is something that everybody wants, everyone seeks but few get. Those who cherish it get lost in it and above all, never forget it.

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  2. seriously now... your not taking this seriously ...serious is wat ppl do when they want something really bad so they force themselves. sometimes forcing yoruself makes you kinda grumpy, which is why some ppl are serious and grumpy but seriously? UPDATE

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